Is it a poem or random words?and let me know if you like ?

Posted on March 16, 2010 by admin

Tonight I have strange feeling

I feel my heart is a sky hosting my emotions stars

Oh I swear…There are no limits to my feelings

I’m head over heels in love

I know I’m living in isolation

Between us storm, clouds, waves , ice and fire

only your eyes and voice I go around looking for

AM I lost in long impossible road!!!

Am I traveling in the ocean of your eyes without any destination!!

But if I had choose

I will choose your love for second time..

I would say it’s a poem- anything can really be a poem. Without a regular rhythm and rhyme it would be considered free verse poetry- a very legitimate form of poetry. You do not need to add any rhythm or anything else if you like it this way.

I think it sounds good as it is! :)

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4 Responses to Is it a poem or random words?and let me know if you like ?

  1. adamrv1 says:
    March 16, 2010 at 10:02 am

    you need some rhythm and repetition in there
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  2. Mandy says:
    March 16, 2010 at 10:07 am

    I like your poem very much! There are many different types of poems and not all of them have to rhyme. I think you did a very nice job.. (:
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  3. Sarah O says:
    March 16, 2010 at 10:33 am

    I would say it’s a poem- anything can really be a poem. Without a regular rhythm and rhyme it would be considered free verse poetry- a very legitimate form of poetry. You do not need to add any rhythm or anything else if you like it this way.

    I think it sounds good as it is! :)
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    I’m an English teacher of 6 years.

  4. naomi lily says:
    March 16, 2010 at 10:42 am

    I agree with adamrv1 but I like the "storm, clouds, waves…" part.
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