I wandered lonely as a cloud
That floats on high o’er vales and hills
When all at once I saw a crowd
A host of golden daffodils.
So far so good but I can’t think of any more. Any suggestions?
Sorry everyone else took you seriously. I thought it was funny "what I wrote"!
Don’t worry he’s been out of copyright for many, many years.
well it`s original,,,,,:)
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the boy stood on the burning deck
picking his nose like mad
he rolled them in to little balls
and flicked them at his dad.
Sorry Lilly but your poem is what is called plagiarism. A piece of writing that has been copied from someone else and is presented as being your own work.
Your 1st, 3rd and 4th lines are taken from Wordsworth’s poem "Daffodils".
This is not legal and can warrant the copyright act coming into play here. DELET THIS POEM NOW.
Robert
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Bears a striking resemblance to Wordsworth.
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for legal reasons, lets just hope your a decendant of wordsworth
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You’re a plagarizing moron. You didn’t write that poem, Wordsworth did. Delete it now or I will report you
3..2…1!
Too late! You’ve been reported
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I don’t like those old fashioned poetic licence words like o’er
Crowd doesn’t really rhyme with cloud. Proud does. Try that.
I saw a proud lot of yellow daffs. It’s so important to choose the right image in poetry. All depends on the word’s worth.
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Are you a moron?
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have you tried singing ?
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I picked the lot and sold them on
I’m filthy rich, I made a ton
Tomorrow I’ll being orchid picking
Then my nose and bogey flicking
Finally I’ll be picking balls
For yes the national lottery calls
And when I’m on my yatch at sea
I’ll bless dear William’s poetry
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Sorry everyone else took you seriously. I thought it was funny "what I wrote"!
Don’t worry he’s been out of copyright for many, many years.
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i reckon wordsworth wont mind you copying him cos e aint feeling none to chatty.
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heard it before?